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Wendys isn't really this cool by ~amazingdavidman:iconamazingdavidman:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Illustrations > Conceptual

©2008 ~amazingdavidman
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Submitted: February 19
File Size: 2.6 MB
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Resolution: 600×903
Comments: 17
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After seeing the last Wendy's one I did, another friend I worked with there wanted one of herself, so here it is. The perspective is better on this one, definitely, as are some other things (works a bit better compositionally), so I'm going to consider it progress.

Comments and criticisms, if you please.

EDIT: Having looked at it for a while now I see how the composition could be better--I should have pushed the background guys more to the right to fill up that corner. It'd break them and the girl into two silhouettes and balance things more. Lessons learned.

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~gondring:icongondring: Feb 19, 2008, 1:47:36 PM
Lol if only it was that kool... I might eat there more often :D

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Dude. I now have a sig.
Sweet!
~amazingdavidman:iconamazingdavidman: Feb 19, 2008, 2:13:59 PM
I might never have stopped working there :P

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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life

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~gondring:icongondring: Feb 19, 2008, 2:21:54 PM
Haha I might have worked there...

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Dude. I now have a sig.
Sweet!
~JamminBison:iconJamminBison: Feb 19, 2008, 6:04:11 PM
I would say...that the left arm looks a bit awkward. Not that I can point out what's wrong, because I don't think it's glaringly obvious, it just looks awkward. I dunno'. I think the inking could've been a little bit tighter, too.

Overall though, these past couple uploads I think you're improving pretty damned fast. Which is cool. Keep going. 8DDD
~amazingdavidman:iconamazingdavidman: Feb 19, 2008, 7:54:57 PM
Damn. You're not wrong. The forearm is too long. Thanks for the head's up :P

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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life

DJC:flagcanada:
~JamminBison:iconJamminBison: Feb 19, 2008, 8:03:07 PM
XD At least you caught it. Welcome~
~Warly:iconWarly: Feb 20, 2008, 8:02:35 PM
her collar bone looks like its drifting sideways a bit.
~amazingdavidman:iconamazingdavidman: Feb 20, 2008, 10:05:15 PM
So does your mom! :P Kidding
I think the problem isn't so much with her collar bone as it is the placement of the line I drew for the front of her neck. But it makes the collarbone look wrong. This whole drawing is falling apart! hahaha

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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life

DJC:flagcanada:
~Warly:iconWarly: Feb 21, 2008, 10:46:27 PM
nono its just little stuff, still a cool pic :)
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